Saturday, February 25, 2012

Blood of an Enemy Update - 2/25

I am now up to 62 handwritten pages on this story.
I am writing roughly 10 pages a day in between orientation and training for work, as well all the things I have to do at home.  So far, the flow of the story is still going strong.  I can't not work on it or I get antsy feeling I've left something important undone.  This is a good thing.  I actually was in the middle of a good scene when I had to leave for work on Friday but happily, I was able to return to where I left off when I got home, finishing the scene in the same energy as I'd begun it.
Once this week of training is done, I'll only be working weekends so I'll be able to more fully focus on my writing.  I am already thinking of cover art ideas.

Additions to Playlist

Here are some more songs I have added to my playlist.  A couple of them I forgot to write down the bands they're by so sorry about that.

Burn - Apocalyptica
Across the Rainbow Bridge
The Decision Tree
Dead Sound of Misery - Blind Guardian
This Will Never End - Blind Guardian
Turn the Page - Blind Guardian
Lionheart - Blind Guardian
Fire Forever - Adagio
Children of the Dead - Adagio
Terror Jungle - Adagio
End of Me
Broken Pieces
Helden - Apocalyptica
Ion - Apocalyptica
Pain - Blind Guardian
Into the Storm - Blind Guardian
When Sorrow Sang - Blind Guardian
Time Stands Still - Blind Guardian
The Curse of Feanor - Blind Guardian
Somewhere Far Beyond - Blind Guardian
Ride into Obsession - Blind Guardian
Valhalla - Blind Guardian


Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Great News on the Job Front

I got called back by Lowe's with the results of my drug test - I go in for orientation tomorrow, and I'll know all the particulars about the job including the position I'll be in and my first schedule.  I am really pleased I am back to work.  I have to find a way to support myself until one of my books makes the best sellers list, and I get launched into the sphere of making money solely off my books. :-)

Crimson Knight Excerpt

Note: this book is not currently on the market due to needing a rewrite for the second half of the book.


                                                        
                                                            Chapter One

    



Kitya swore roundly when she spotted the flags waving from the rooftops of the village she was riding towards.  Still a league away, the flags were small but still visible.  Kitya reined in and swore some more.
      “What is it?  What’s wrong?” her brown robed companion asked, tucking a lock of blonde hair behind a blunt tipped ear with a calloused hand.
      “A tourney,” Kitya has distaste written all over her pretty face. “Father is hosting one of his blasted tournaments.”  She gathered up the reins of her warhorse and started turning his head away. “Let’s go back to Elmwood until this madness is over.”
      “Nay,” her companion said, shaking his head. “We must go on to your home.”
      Kitya glared at the half elf darkly as he sat astride a bay gelding.  She didn’t care if he was one of the most powerful mages in all the land, he was making her mad.
      “Are you serious, Sandel?” she demanded and flipped a gloved hand at the town. “That’s sheer lunacy going on over there!  Men in armor are going after each other with swords or lances, or both, some of the crazier ones, and for what!  Some bit of gold and a reputation? Hah!  The ones who die or get grievously wounded ought to be lauded for their stupidity in joining a tourney in the first place!”
      Sandel regarded her with calm blue eyes full of wisdom beyond his seeming youth until the young woman finished her tirade.
      “The tourney serves other purposes, as you well know.  An alliance between two kingdoms was once negotiated and signed during a tourney,” he said, his tone quiet but firm. “We must go on.”
      Kitya, grumbling, guided her mount back around, glanced sourly at Sandel, and urged her huge roan into a gallop.
      “Come, Shadow,” she called.
      A giant black cat answered her call, emerging from the thick bushes lining the road.  He paced beside the warhorse’s front left leg, easily keeping up.  He was a sight to see with his graceful movements and his big head coming up to the horse’s belly.
      Thus, Kitya rode through the village of Angweiss and started the approach to her ancestral home – a stone fortress rising four stories into the air.  It had towers on all four corners and was properly manned and fortified.
Kitya glowered at the colorful banners draped over the gray stonewall of her home and at the flags flying from the ramparts and windows.  All of them proclaimed the tourney and indicated who was competing.  One banner in particular made Kitya’s blood run cold, and she considered turning around to ride off despite Sandel.  The banner was one depicting a pair of crossed swords behind a rampart lion on a field of royal blue.
 “I see the Crimson Ravens are represented this time,” Sandel spoke up, drawing her attention from the offensive banner.
Kitya scanned the fortress walls until she caught sight of the blood red pennant rippling in the breeze.  The emblem was of an extended black wing with a shackled, sword-wielding claw emerging from it. The emblem was well known by nearly the entire land.  They were a highly respected order of knights, and to be a member was a prize sought out by many, gained by few.
                “Should make for a predictable outcome then,” the warrioress smirked. “I really doubt anyone here even comes close to the skill level of a Raven, but we shall see.”
                “Indeed, we shall,” Sandel said, hiding a smile.







Chapter Two





Going around to the stables, the pair of travelers was greeted by several grooms. One of them, a tow headed boy of eleven years, grinned up at Kitya as he came to assist her with her horse.
                “Welcome home, Lady Kitya!” he greeted her. “’Tis a tourney going on!”
                “So I see, Tobu,” Kitya said, groaning inwardly at the use of her title, and she dismounted, swinging down from the saddle in one fluid motion as her warhorse knelt. She handed the boy the reins as the horse stood up again. “Be sure to get Alex to help you rub Blood Thorne down and don’t miss a spot.”
                “Aye, M’Lady!” he said and then, he blurted. “I’ve been made a squire!”
     Kitya blinked in surprise and then, she arched a brow at him, cocking her head to one side.
     “Oh?” she drawled, pretending to be skeptical. “And just who might have the pleasure of your services then?”
     “Sir Kitan, your brother, M’Lady,” Toby said, his eyes glowing with pride. “He was knighted not long ago an’ since he has no need of me today, he said I could ‘elp out in the stables for a bit. To stay out of trouble, says he.”
     Kitya’s teeth ground at his continued use of her title, but she couldn’t gainsay him because he wouldn’t understand how much she loathed it.  Therefore, she just smiled and dealt with it.
     “A wise decision,” Sandel said, stepping away from the groom taking possession on his bay. “See to your duties then, Boy, whilst we see to ours.”
     Toby, wide-eyed at the sight of the half-elf mage, bobbed several bows to both of them while moving backwards. He kept a tight hold on Blood Thorn’s reins as he went, and the stallion followed him willingly enough.
     “Aye, I certainly shall!” Toby promised and turning around, he practically ran into the stable.
     “You certainly have an interesting effect on the boy,” Kitya observed, a bemused smile on her face as she followed Sandel to the fortress proper. “You scared him.”
     Sandel shrugged his shoulders.
     “I can’t help it if my reputation as a grouch precedes me,” he said, his tone dry. “Besides, the boy would have talked your ears off if I hadn’t stepped in, and I’m hungry.”
     Kitya rolled her eyes and laughed, clapping her friend on the back.
     “You’re something else, Sandel,” she told him.
     Sandel nodded in agreement, relishing the sound of her laughter; she rarely laughed any more and she was still so young.
     After a brief exchange with the guards at the main gate, Kitya and Sandel entered the fortress proper. Once inside, Kitya led the way towards the kitchens, feeling a little hungry herself. They were in sight of the stairs leading down to the kitchens when the young woman heard her name being called in a strident, demanding tone. Visibly stiffening and setting her jaw, Kitya slowly turned to see an older woman bearing down on her, a frown marring the other woman’s rather pretty face.
     “You aren’t going to the kitchens to ear, are you?” the woman demanded, drawing up short not far from the pair, and her hands went to her ample hips.
     Kitya bit back a smart remark about eating being one reason to be in the kitchens, her mother not being known for her brains or her wit.  Sandel bowed to the noblewoman who was clearly ignoring him.
     “Actually, Mother, we were going to do just that,” Kitya said, forcing herself to smile and sound pleasant.
     Kitya’s mother raked her eyes over Kitya’s dust covered leathers, taking special note of the young woman’s long, single braid whose hair escaped in tiny wisps all down it, and her frown deepened at the sight of the sheathed sword hanging from its belt around her daughter’s trim waist.
     “Go clean up instead,” she ordered, still ignoring Sandel. “The last two matches of the tourney will be over in an hour’s time. After all that’s over, we’ll have dinner in honor of the victor. You will be there.”
     Before Kitya could retort, her mother turned around and stomped away, disapproval in every line of her plump body as she left.  Kitya pulled a face at her back.
     “Lady Keela seems to be in a rather good mood today,” Sandel observed. “Usually, her face is nearly purple when she sees you after one of your absences.”
     Kitya snickered, still watching her mother walk away.
     “Come on,” she said, finally turning away. “Let’s not make Lady Dragon any madder than she already is.”
     The warrior noblewoman led the way up another set of stairs close by that led to the sleeping chambers on the third floor.  She found an empty room for Sandel to sleep in, and she sent a passing chambermaid to fetch fresh linens for the bed.  Kitya waited around for the woman to return, noting all the boots lined up in front of doors, waiting to be polished.
     “So fortunate you are to have found an open room, M’lord,” the servant said as she returned and started changing the bed linens. “So many have come to the tourney this time.”
     “Oh? So who’s winning?” Sandel asked.
     “That would be Sir Angarde a doin’ that, M’lord,” the young woman said. “He’s a fightin’ Sir Berek here shortly.” Her eyes lit up as she looked over the half elf. “An’ n’er two finer warriors I e’er met, tis true.”
     Sandel merely nodded. Kitya sniggered, making the girl blush.  The warrioress pushed away from the doorframe she had been leaning against, and she gave Sandel a jaunty salute.
     “I’ll meet you downstairs in a bit,” she said and headed for her own rooms in the west tower.






Chapter Three   




 Up until her thirteenth year, Kitya had had her rooms in the private family area of the fortress.  She’d been the perfect little lady, though still prone to do her own thing at times, but she had still been the apple of her mother’s eye. Then, her birthday had come, and things changed.  A few days after that fateful day, without a word of warning to anyone, she and Shadow, then only six months old, had moved her things to the west tower, She’d magically sealed every entry to the rooms she’d claimed as her own, and she’d left the fortress, never saying why.  When she returned, a couple of years later, she was not only wearing the soft green leathers favored by elves, she was also wearing a sword, which she used with considerable skill.  There was also a cold look in her blue eyes that had not been there before her birthday.  She refused to wear a dress and sparred with her many brothers who were delighted in this change in her because it was something they could finally relate to. The rest of the family, the women any way, who were dismayed.
      Now, once again in her old bedroom, she merely dropped her things on the bed and went out again.
She headed down to the kitchens where she found Sandel talking to the cooks and enjoying some bread and cheese.
      “Save some room for dinner M’Lady,” one of the cooks warned Kitya as she grabbed some sugared nuts, “else your mother will be very angry.”
      Kitya shrugged her shoulders, but she did follow Sandel back out without grabbing anything else to eat.  The pair headed up into the stands where the family had their box set off from the rest of the town.  Keela glared at Kitya’s clothing, but she said nothing.  Kitya made her way over to a column where she could see, and Sandel perched himself next to a pair of the girl’s brothers where he could chat without disturbing anyone.
      A herald came out now, and everyone fell silent as he introduced his master.  Kitya, recognizing the livery the herald work, ignored the man to look for the master, her eyes cold and narrowed.  She spotted him riding in on a young black stallion, a Rothgar warhorse, far inferior to her own Blood Thorne.  She sneered at both horse and rider.  It horse of poor breeding for a man of even worse breeding.  Outwardly, Sir Berek was a handsome, silver-tongued devil every mother thought she wanted for her daughter while inside, he was the vile, perverted creature every father hated for his daughter.  Kitya knew him all too well.
      Now, he rode to his place on the field, mailed hand raised in salute to those who cheered for him.  Arrogance radiated from him like a vile stench.  Kitya’s stomach clenched with hate, and she thought she would vomit.  She turned away even as her youngest sister, Kitma, squealed and clapped her hands in delight.
      “A favorite have you, Sister Mine?” the warrioress managed to drawl, looking bemused instead of sick.
      Indeed, Kitma held a favor in her hand, a lovely embroidered piece weighted with gold tips.
      “She favors Sir Berek,” Kitan said, a teasing lilt in his voice.
      “He’s far more handsome than Sir Angarde,” the little girl shot back. “Just look at him!”
      Kitya followed her sister’s pointing hand with her eyes to the other side of the field.  A man dressed in plate mail with black and red silks rode in on a large dun colored charger, also draped in red and black silk.  The emblem of the Crimson Ravens graced his breastplate.
      Kitya’s breath caught in her throat as he removed his crested helm and tucked it under one arm.  Chestnut hair laced with gold fell in shining waves past his shoulders, a marked contrast to Berek’s close-cropped blonde hair.  The man had the heavy brows of a Lisnin but the rounder chin and fuller mouth of a Southern Prisian.  His skin was the dusky brown of many days spent out in the sun rather than the nearly milk white skin of courtly Berek.  He lifted golden brown eyes to meet her grey ones, and Kitya felt as if lightning had struck her.  She leaned against the post as her knees went weak, and things low in her belly got tight.  She hoped nobody noticed as she forced herself to look away from him.
      “Well, don’t you think Sir Berek is much more handsome than Sir Angarde?” Kitma demanded, looking up at her sister.
      Kitya pretended to be bored by it all.
      “They’re both ugly,” she said.
      Kitan laughed at Kitma’s gasp of dismay and outrage.
      “You’re impossible!” the younger girl cried and moved over to where her other sisters were sitting.
      “That’ll teach her,” Kitan said, nodding as he looked after the girl.
      “I hear congratulations are in order SIR Kitan,” Kitya said, waving her sister off, and she grinned at her older brother with pride.
      Kitan blushed, but he beamed with pride as well.
      “Hush, here come our champions,” one of their sisters, hissed at them.
      Seeing the arrogant smirk on Berek’s face as he headed for the family’s box, his eyes on Kitma where she’d moved to the railing, Kitya made a decision.  She always wore an emerald leaf pendant on a leather thong around her neck – a gift from a very old friend.  Now, as she removed it, she knew her friend would understand what she was about to do with it.
      She made her way down to Kitma as the two jousters reined in before the family.  Kitma, blushing, rose as Berek saluted her with one mailed hand and presented her with the tip of his lance.  The young girl carefully draped her favor over the lance, as far towards him as she could reach, and Berek lifted it so the favor slid down to his hand.  He took the favor, kissed it and tucked it into the stylized rose protecting his armpit, the usual place for such things.
      Eyes challenging, Kitya displace another sister, Katmi, and looked Sir Angarde in the face, the pendant in one hand.  The charger bowed as the knight touched his heart with a fist in salute to her.  He then presented her with his own lance’s tip, and she placed the necklace on the wooden shaft.  It rode safely down and after kissing it, as was custom, his eyes never leaving hers; Sir Angarde put it around his own neck.
      The two combatants rode back to their places while murmuring arose amongst the gathering.  Earl Asric rose to his feet, arms opened wide, and everyone fell silent.
      “Let the final joust begin!” he ordered, and the crowd went wild.
      Inwardly smirking at the shocked looks most of her family was giving her, Kitya sauntered back to her place and leaned against the column, arms crossed over her chest.  She was the epitome of casual indifference.  She eyed Sandel who moved up beside her with a small smile pulling at his lips.  He rubbed his chin thoughtfully as he watched Sir Angarde take his mark.
      “Seems you’ve changed your mind about tourneys,” he murmured, pitching his voice so only she could hear him.
      Kitya watched the knight a moment and shrugged.
      “Not at all,” she drawled, watching the Raven charge, lance lowered, “anyone’s who’s against Berek deserves a gift of thanks.”
      Sandel snorted softly.
      “You gave a perfect stranger a favor,” he told her. “People are going to talk.”
      Kitya’s eyes went cold, and she stiffened.
      “They always have,” she muttered, her tone dark.
The joust ended with a great clashing noise as Sir Angarde unhorsed Sire Berek.  The hapless nobleman fell over backwards, landing in a very ungraceful heap, and he didn’t rise.  A court physician with two helpers and a tourney official hurried over to check on him.  Sir Angarde gave his broken lance to his squire and waited, still mounted, to see what the physician would say.  If Berek got up, the match would end with a sword fight.  Berek stayed down, and it was the official who got up from kneeling beside the downed jouster.
“Sir Angarde is the winner!” he called out to Earl Asric. “Sir Berek is out cold.”
The crowd roared, stomping their feet and jeering as much as they cheered.  Many threw things as Berek as he was carried off the field on a litter.
In the family viewing box, Kitma was beside herself, crying and acting as if Berek had been killed.  She jumped up in a fit of passion and rushed over to Kitya who was simply watching her.
“Your ugly knight hurt Berek!” she accused, clutching her lace kerchief now damp with tears. “I hate you!”
She ran out of the box, two sisters following her while Kitya arched an eyebrow in mock surprise.  Inside, she was full of dread.  The younger girl was obviously smitten, and Berek took advantage of girls like that, for his own amusement.
“Well, it was an interesting joust,” Sandel drawled as the rest of the family filed out; the winners of the tourney would be presented with their awards at the feast later that evening.
“It was the inevitable outcome,” Kitya told him, turning away when she saw her mother coming over. “I told you nobody can match the skill of a Raven.”
“I didn’t mean that,” the mage said, nodding before he too turned away.
Kitya turned to find her father at her elbow.  Looking tired, he smiled at her.
“You chose well tonight,” he said, tucking one of her hands into the crook of one of his arms so they could walk together.
“I chose with my head, not my heart,” she told him, her free hand resting on his arm as well. “I should have wagered, but it was a sure thing.”
“Berek is a favorite while the Raven was the underdog this day.  You would’ve gotten great odds,” Asric told her, winking and chuckling as he patted her hands.
Kitya grinned and shrugged.
“Maybe next time,” she said.
Keela called sharply to Asric from somewhere behind them, and he released Kitya with a sigh.
“Try not to hurt anyone tonight,” he bade the warrioress. “Kita and Katmi have suitors amongst the visiting nobles, and Kiton and Kitan are wooing some fine ladies from other visitors.”
Kitya grinned at the thought of her older brothers settling down.
“I promise to try not to mess up any wedding plans, Father,” she assured him.
Kitya went up to her rooms and reluctantly, she put on one of the gowns she kept in the wardrobe.  It was two years out of season, but its rich burgundy color always complimented her light auburn hair and pale gold skin so, she didn’t care.  With only five small toggles cleverly hidden in the lay of the dress, Kitya could forgive the low curving neckline that showed a great deal of her bosom.  A tucked in waist and gently falling skirts flattered her flat belly and full hips.  Ignoring court styles regarding hair, she did her hair up into a series of looped braids favored by the Intari Elves.  Using a garter to help hold close the dirk she strapped to her calf, she put on some black slippers.  The sleeveless gown required she wear black elbow length gloves, and she was only glad they were made of rough silk and not slick satin as she pulled them on; she hated dropping her wine.
Dressed, she headed downstairs, ignoring the looks she was getting from people she passed, servants and nobles alike.

Monday, February 20, 2012

Blood of an Enemy Update - 2/20

I managed to get 40 pages written in the last 4 days.  I am very pleased with my progress.  I am feeling a good flow with this attempt so I don't expect to have to start rewriting again. ;-)  I hope to keep writing 10 pages a day until the rough draft is done.  With the very good possibility of being employed by the end of the week, we'll just have to see how things go.

Saturday, February 18, 2012

18 February 2012

I didn't meet my writing quota yesterday so I am working twice as hard today - just not right now.
I added some more songs to my playlist yesterday, and I'm going to add more in the coming week as I listen to more music a friend is recommending to me.

I took my drug test day before yesterday at Lowe's, and I am having to wait 3-5 days to get the results back.  I am looking forward to working again, and I don't care what position I end up getting or how many hours I get.  I just care about working again so I can reach my goal with my writing eventually.

Friday, February 17, 2012

A Memorial

A close friend of mine lost his pet cat yesterday.  Subotai was more than a pet, he was a member of the family.  I was not able to meet this wonderful feline, but since he's was my friend's companion, I'm sure he was noble and loving.  I wasn't home when my friend was trying to contact me online - I don't have a cell phone right now - and I feel bad because I didn't find out until today what my friend is going through.  I lost my feline companion, Hestia, over a year ago, but she was a member of my family as well so I know how it feels to lose an animal companion.

This post is in memorial of that wonderful cat and his equally wonderful owner.  You are both in my thoughts, and I mourn your loss.

Writing Update/Playlist

Writing Update

My playlist is not complete, but there are enough songs on it to help me write. I have written 10 pages on Blood of an Enemy so far.  I've finally found my flow with it, and I'm pleased with the results I'm getting.  I plan to write more on the story today, get at least another 10 pages or so on it.  I'd like to get the rough draft done, completely, in about a month's time.

Playlist
The following is what I've got going on my playlist right now.

The Wolf Inside - Blind Guardian
Blood In My Eyes - Disturbed
I Stand Alone - Godsmack
Incubus - Kamelot
Black Halo - Kamelot
If I Close My Eyes Forever - Ozzy Osbourne
Reise, Reise - Rammstein
The Abyss In Your Eyes - Stratovarius
Ein Kleiner Mensch - Rammstein
Live and Let Die - Guns N Roses
I'm Alive - Helloween
Follow the Sign - Helloween
Where the Rain Grows - Helloween
Death Tone - Manowar
Metal Daze - Manowar
World Coming Down - Type O Negative
Pyretta Blaze - Type O Negative
Day Tripper - medley by Type O Negative
All Hallows Eve - Type O Negative
Chained to You - Savage Garden
Chain Gang, Bang Bang - Neon Garden
Silence of the Darkness - Kamelot
I Don't Care - Apocalyptica
Burn - Apocalyptica

I am going through my Ayreon and more Blind Guardian to see if I'm going to add any from them.  I'm also looking at Adagio.


Jordan mentioned how many writers are using playlists to write by, and I have to agree with him.  Most of the writers I've talked to over the years have mentioned having music they write by.  It gives us a sound track of sorts.  I use the music to help me stay focused on my story, keeping me in the mood and mindset.  I am picky about the songs I choose, and it's the music more than the words that stir me.  I can't understand Rammstein but I love the music and the sound of their voices.

Let me know if you use a playlist and what bands you choose to have on them.








Sunday, February 12, 2012

Southern Romance - novel excerpt


The gallery was the very picture of elegance with its pure white walls and plush ivory carpet.  The light fixtures, subdued in the corners of the room and bright over the paintings they were highlighting, were all silver filigree.  The plaques under the paintings were silver and proclaimed the names of the paintings in flowing script.
People of all shapes, sizes and modes of dress, all obviously wealthy, milled around amongst the paintings, talking in low tones like they were in a museum and sipping champagne from fluted crystal glasses.  Wait staff, dressed in silver and black, walked around with trays of more champagne glasses.  They offered them to the patrons with polite murmurs.
Cryslys hummed as she checked the positions of her paintings on the gallery walls.  She was feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness as this was her first real art showing.
“This exhibit is absolutely fabulous!” her friend, Susan, gushed as she swept up to Cryslys, her blue eyes sparkling. “It’s sure to be a success!”
Cryslys smiled at Susan, secretly envying her friend her poise, sophistication and perfectly styled blonde hair.
‘If I sell some then, it’ll be a success,” Cryslys told her with a wry smile.
She flicked a stray hair out of her face, and Susan patted her on the back before she breezily moved on, chatting with the people she met as she moved about.  Cryslys watched her go for a moment, and then, she turned back to the painting she had been fixing before her friend had shown up.  A couple stood close by, admiring another of her paintings.
“This one is lovely, absolutely lovely!” the elegantly dressed woman gushed to her male companion, a well manicured and beringed hand on his sleeve. “The landscape is just so realistic!”
“I agree, Luv.  It’s almost as if you could step into the painting and be right there,” he companion agreed, nodding. “Like those paintings in Mary Poppins.”
The couple laughed at this, and Cryslys hid a smile, pleased someone liked her work despite the fanciful comparison.
“I must have this painting, Gregory.  It’d be smashing in the salon at our summer home,” the woman insisted, her eyes never leaving the painting.
“Very well, Liana, let’s talk to the gallery owner about buying it and then, we’ll view the others.  Perhaps, we’ll see another painting that moves you as much as this one so obviously has,” Gregory replied, giving her a warm smile.
Cryslys watched the couple walk away and then, she took a quick peek at the painting the woman wanted so much.  It was one she’d done of countryside in spring, and she was pleased it was being sold.  It had been one of her favorites to work on.
By the end of the evening’s showing, all but ten of her twenty-nine pieces had been sold.  Susan bade farewell to the last of the patrons and turned to Cryslys who was lingering by one of the remaining paintings.  She smiled at the young artist who arched a brow at her as she joined her.  Susan stroked the edge of the painting in front of them.
“Don’t worry about these.  We’ll leave them up for a few more days, for those who couldn’t get by tonight and then, we’ll talk a bout closing the exhibit.” she told Cryslys. “You did wonderfully well for your opening day.”
“Really?” Cryslys asked, trailing after Susan as they headed back to her office.
“Oh yes!  I would never kid about something like that!” Susan assured her, sitting down at her desk. “You’re very talented, you know, and now, thanks to me, others know it too.”
Susan wrote out a check and tearing it off the pad with a flourish, she handed it to Cryslys with a triumphant smile.
“There you are Dearest, your first check,” she said. “Minus my gallery’s fees of course.”
Cryslys beamed with pleasure when she saw the huge sum written on the check.
“Wow!” she breathed, clutching the paper to her. “Thank you so much!”
“No, thank you!  It was your hard work that’s got us this far,” Susan said. “Your work is so sublime I absolutely adore being around it!  Now, when you’re ready to have another show, call me first.  I’ll move heaven and earth, and more if I have to; to make sure you have space in my gallery.”
“Don’t worry, I will,” Cryslys promised her friend, smiling shyly. “I think I’ll go home and celebrate now.”




                                                                                        Chapter 2



          Dieing to celebrate, the young woman stopped along the way home to buy a bottle of expensive champagne and a single red rose for her live in boyfriend.  Humming a happy tune, she let herself into her cozy little one-bedroom apartment.  It wasn’t a dump, but it wasn’t as nice as she wanted it to be either.  She actually dreamed of living in a house, not a crummy apartment.  Hearing music, she grinned.  It meant her boyfriend was home and awake, maybe even waiting for her.
“Joshua!” she called out, barely able to keep the excitement out of her voice. “I’m home!”
She dumped her purse on the coffee table and, armed with the champagne and rose, she headed for her bedroom in the back part of the apartment.  She was eager to share the evening’s success with her future husband, Joshua Robere.
“Joshua, I did it!” she crowed as she flung open the bedroom door. “I was a hit tonight!”
She froze in shock, eyes widening, at the scene before her.  Two naked women flanked an equally naked Joshua.  Joshua had a length of rubber tubing wrapped around his bicep and was holding a hypodermic needle to the crook in his arm where there was a knot of veins.  Cryslys was caught totally unaware, and she was both revolted and appalled by what she was seeing.  Joshua stared back at her with guilty eyes.
“Uh, Crys,” he said, slowing putting the syringe down. “How’d it go tonight, babe?”
“Hurry up Joshy, me next remember?” the bimbo on Joshua’s left purred, pouting her crimson lips and batting her long lashes as she rubbed herself against him.
Cryslys let her disgust show clearly on her face.
“You lied to me, “she accused her man, anger making her voice tight. “You told me you couldn’t come to my showing tonight because you had to work late. How could you do this to me?!”
She screamed the last at him and with a sob, she threw the rose on the floor and the champagne at the closest wall before fleeing the room and the empty stares of the drugged out whores.
“Crys, wait!” Joshua called out after her, sounding half hearted.
Cryslys ignored him, snatching up her purse and slamming the front door on her way out.  Getting in her car, she drove aimlessly around Chicago for several hours, crying.   She kept wracking her brain for a reason why her relationship with Joshua, once strong and loving, had gone so horribly wrong.  She knew there was no way she was going to marry him now.  Not after what she’d just seen.
She was stopped at a red light when she reached for her purse and spotted something on the floorboards of the passenger side.  Checking the light to make sure it was still red, she leaned over and after a couple of tries, she finally managed to grab the piece of paper before the traffic light turned green.  Moving again, Cryslys held the paper against the steering wheel while she drove.
Looking it over as best she could while she drove, she found the paper to be an advertisement from a travel agency, a brochure.  It offered a trip to a place in Texas called Galveston Island.  The ad proclaimed the place to be a friendly little island connected to the Texas mainland by a four lane causeway and a small fleet of ferries.  It went on to describe how the island held the national record for the longest continuous sidewalk.  The sidewalk was the top part of a seawall simply known to locals as The Wall.  It also had lots of historical buildings that had managed to survive a massive hurricane in 1900 that had devastated the rest of the island and a great deal of the mainland. 
Cryslys thought the place sounded quaint and possibly, the perfect spot to forget Joshua and his wrongdoings.  She decided to spend the night at a hotel and get up early the next morning to call her travel agent friend.  She only hoped he could give her as good a deal as the one in the ad she was looking at.
      “Greg, I want to go to Galveston Texas,” she told her friend the next morning when he answered the phone, and she proceeded to tell him all about the brochure she’d found in her car.
Greg Tremaine was a fantastic travel agent who’d found her many wonderful trips that fit her small budget in the past, and he’d become a good friend of hers along the way.  She trusted him to do right by her when it came to getting a good deal on a trip.
“Going off to find fresh inspiration for those smashing paintings of yours?” he asked when she was done.
Cryslys could hear him typing away on his work computer.
“You could say that,” she hedged, not really ready to talk about Joshua just yet.
“Will Joshua be coming along?” he asked, sounding distracted as he continued to type.
Cryslys knew this was a standard question, but it still stung.
“No, he has to work,” she lied.
“Let me see what I can come up with for what sounds like paradise then,” he told her. “How’d your showing go last night?  I would’ve come, but Melanie still has the measles.”
Melanie was Greg’s youngest daughter and a perfect angel from the way he talked about her.  Cryslys had met her and adored her too.
“I understand completely, Greg, and I hope she feels better soon,” she said.  “My showing had a great opening night according to Susan.  She said she’d keep all my work up for several more days, to generate more interest so, you’’ have plenty of chances to see what’s up.”
“You can count on that,” Greg told her. “Shall I call you at home when I have the package ready?”
“That’ll be fine, just please, hurry,” Cryslys bade him, trying not to sound desperate. “I’ve got the itch pretty bad.”
“It’s as good as done sweetheart, “he assured her, chuckling at what he thought to be eagerness, and he rang off.
A quick phone call assured her Joshua was really at work so, Cryslys rushed home, calling a locksmith along the way to come change the locks on her front door.  She planned to put in reinforced locks and latches on all her windows as well.  She hurried to get Susan’s check cashed and called an alarm company while she was in line at the bank.  She might only be renting the apartment, but she wanted to make sure her things were safe while she was gone.  Everything she owned meant something to her, and she wanted them protected, just in case.
As the locks and alarm system were being installed, Cryslys finished her own little job and packed all of Joshua’s things in the boxes she’d remembered to pick up on her way home from the bank.  She filled all of his suitcases too; the man was a clothes horse.  She put the suitcases and all of the boxes out on the front porch and when the workmen were done, she locked the door behind them.  She called Susan next to see how her paintings were doing, not expecting much.
“Oh Darling, I was just about to call you!” Susan exclaimed, sounding very excited. “You’ll never guess what happened just now!”
“Um…what?” the young woman asked, chewing her bottom lip nervously.
“Only the most fantabulous miracle ever!” Susan gushed. “An interior decorating firm, very prestigious I might add, just bought all of your remaining paintings for a mansion they’re working on!  Isn’t that the best news ever?!”
Cryslys was floored.
“That’s….. That’s incredible!” she breathed.
“A one in a million happening doll.  I’ll have your check ready for you this evening, okay?” her friend said.
“That’ll be fine.” Cryslys said, too stunned to think.
“Thank you so much again!” Susan said, sounding cheery. “See you tonight!”
Ringing off, Cryslys happily packed her own bags for an extended stay down south in Galveston Texas.  She was determined not to think of men while she was there. She’d just focus on her art and nothing else would matter.  Finished packing, she took a shower and was nearly done getting dressed when the phone rang.  Towel drying her hair along the way, she went to answer it.
“Hello?” she said, a bit worried it was Joshua telling her he was coming home early.
“Cryslys honey, I’ve got everything arranged for you, and you just have to say the word to be on the next flight out to Galveston first thing in the morning. “ Greg announced to her without preamble, sounding very pleased with himself.
“Could you possibly get me on a flight tonight?” she asked, crossing her fingers.
“There’s one leaving tonight around six from Midway, but it’s going to cost you,” he warned.  “After that, it’s the red eye until eight in the morning. “
“The one at six will be fine, I got a good check from Susan,” Cryslys was relieved she’d be gone before Joshua got off work. 
She didn’t want to deal with the drama that would ensue when he saw his things out on the porch and found out his key didn’t fit in the lock any more either.  She made a note to call the landlord to let them know what was going on too.  Her name was the only one on the lease thankfully.
“I’ll have the ticket waiting for you at the reservation desk as usual.  Do you want a round trip?” Greg asked her, and she could hear him typing away again.
“Not this time.  I’m not sure how long I’ll be down there, “Cryslys told him.
“Great.  I’m making reservations for you at the Hotel Galvez.  Other than the San Luis and the Victorian hotels, this one is the best for your price range.  The Flagship is a close second according to my contacts, but what the hey, enjoy yourself, “he told her.  “If you feel the need, the west end of the island has a bunch of rental beach houses available.”
“I’ll take the hotel and think about the rest.  Will you arrange a rental car for me like usual too?” she asked him.
“Sure thing.  You’re going to need one if you decide to rent a house or go sightseeing.  This place is nothing like Chicago.   They don’t even have an airport so, you’re going to have to drive down from Houston Texas anyway, “Greg told her.  “Any new preferences in cars?”
“Just the usual, something nice and mid sized with a decent sized trunk, if possible. “ Cryslys told him.  “How much is this going to cost me?”
Greg told her, and they made their usual payment arrangements.
“I’ll see you when you get back, “he told her before ringing off.  “You can tell me all about it then.”
Cryslys put in a quick call to her landlord and then, she packed her things into her own small car.  She set the new alarm system and locked the apartment door behind her after one last check of all the window latches.  She drove to Susan’s gallery to pick up her final check, and she quickly cashed it, happy she’d never given Joshua access to her bank account.  She banked most of the incredible sum she’d earned and took the rest for her trip. 
Her personal business done, the young woman treated herself to a nice restaurant meal at a bistro Joshua knew nothing about and then, she headed over to the airport.  She wanted to be early for all the pre-boarding security procedures.  She didn’t want to miss her flight for any reason.  She took care of her car and double checked the reservation for the rental in Texas before she collected her ticket.  She checked her luggage and went through all the security checkpoints.  Once she was cleared, her flight was called, and she eagerly boarded.  Once in flight, she only had to change planes once before she landed in Houston Texas early the next morning.





                                                                         Chapter 3






After deplaning, she collected all of her luggage and found the car rental desk.
“I have a reservation for a mid sized car,” Cryslys told the clerk seated there.
“Name, please,” the older woman said, fingers poised over the keyboard like claws.
“Cryslys St. George,” Cryslys said, “The reservation was made yesterday by the Obsidian Travel Agency in Chicago.”
The woman’s fingers flew rapidly over the keyboard for a moment and then, she nodded, smiling.
“Here you are.  We have a sapphire blue Ford Taurus reserved for you,” she said. “I just need to see your identification and have you signed some papers, please.”
A short time later, Cryslys was behind the wheel of her rental car and armed with a map, she headed over to the hotel by the airport so she could get a few hours sleep before driving to Galveston.  She felt so wore out and depressed she thought it best if she got some sleep before continuing on.  She checked into the hotel and after a quick shower, she fell asleep in the queen sized bed.
It was close to noon when Cryslys grabbed a bite to eat in the hotel’s restaurant and then headed down to Galveston.  It was a gorgeous day with the sun shining in a mostly cloudless sky, and a light cooling breeze blew.  Cryslys left the windows down on the car and took a deep breath of the fresh gulf breeze as she drove over the causeway’s bridge. 
It brought back memories of childhood vacations to the seashore, and she felt herself beginning to relax.  She noticed a housing division called Tiki Island off to her right and a place called Dimitri’s off to her left.  Dimitri’s was a little township boasting two businesses within its limits and little else.  Both of them were adult entertainment oriented.  Cryslys wrinkled her nose at them as she passed by.
She did decide checking out Tiki Island at a later date would be nice.  Entering Galveston proper, she spotted an Exxon station and after a glance at her fuel indicator, she decided to fuel up and ask for directions at the same time.  She took the Sixty First Street exit and pulled into the station.  She filled up and headed inside to pay and ask for directions.
The clerk smiled at her as she stepped up to the counter.
“I had gas on Pump 3, “Cryslys told the young man.
“That’ll be thirty-six eighty, please,” he said, “You must be visiting.  You don’t sound like you’re from around here.”
“Just got here actually,” she said, smiling. “Are you familiar with the area?”
The clerk chuckled as he took her money and printed her out a receipt.
“The island isn’t that big,” he told her. “Where you visiting from?”
Chicago,” she told him, not liking his flirting. “How do I get to the Seawall?  I think that’s what it’s called.”
“Any place in particular you getting to?” he asked, leaning against the counter now.
Frowning, Cryslys pulled out the paper she’d written down the name of the hotel Greg had made her reservation at, and she handed it to him.  He looked it over and nodded.
“That’s a good place to stay, and it’s right on the Wall.  Just take Sixty First Street all the way up until you see water,” he told her, handing her the paper back. “Then, you want to turn left.  You’ll get there in no time.”
“I’d stay at the Hotel Galvez myself if I was visiting,” he told her, smiling.
“Thanks, “Cryslys told him, folding the paper back up and putting it away.
She left the station and was on her way again in minutes.  She got back on the right road, and she enjoyed the gorgeous view as she drove.  The day was mild for December, and she was surprised to see all the people one the sidewalk with their dogs, friends, skateboards and bicycles.  Most of them were dressed for the summer too.  She found the Seawall and stared at the sun shining on the water in front of her before the light changed at the intersection.  She turned left, following the clerk’s directions, and she started looking for the Hotel Galvez, keeping an eye on the traffic, which was light, while she drove.
In no time, she found the Hotel Galvez.  It was a fairly large, impressive building, and she parked in the parking lot behind the hotel.   Entering through the rear door, she climbed up five steps and walked through a short hallway to the reservation desk.
“I have a reservation for a room,” she told the lovely young receptionist behind the desk.
“Name please,” the young woman asked her, hands over her keyboard.
“Cryslys St. George,” Cryslys told her. “I’d like to have the room for two weeks, if possible, as well.”
“We can do that for you,” the woman said, typing on the computer and printing out several papers.  She also slid a book over to Cryslys. “Sign in here please.”
Cryslys signed the quaint looking leather bound register with a smile, paid for her room and got help getting her baggage up to her room.
“If you’re interested, the annual celebration of Dickens on the Strand is starting tomorrow,” the hotel employee helping her told her as he put several of her suitcases on her bed.    Seeing as how Charles Dickens was one of her favorite authors, Cryslys was intrigued by this news.
“What is Dickens on the Strand?” she asked.
“Over on Strand Street and Mechanic as well, the streets are blocked off, and the people dress up like people from the Victorian era of England that Charles Dickens lived in and wrote about.  We do this every year at this time,” the young man said. “There are plays based on the books that are performed as well as musical performances by bell ringers and carolers.  They also have elephant rides, all kinds of food and drink stalls, and lots of stuff to buy for gifts for Christmas.”
Cryslys decided right then she’d grab her camera and go check out the festivities the following day.  She just might get some good shots while she was there enjoying herself.
“Thanks for your help,” she said, smiling at the man.
“It was my pleasure,” he said, and he left her alone.
Cryslys unpacked her things and carefully checked her camera equipment before ordering room service.  She watched some television and relaxed for the rest of the day.  

12 February 2012

Well, here I am again.

I spend some time yesterday with a friend of mine who shared music with me.  She introduced me to some really great bands who are mostly from Europe but have managed to mix 1980 heavy metal with medieval/baroque music with great success.  I am making a play list for my gothic novel from these bands plus some older metal bands I like.  I have a lot of songs to go through and choose from so it is going to take me a little while to get a list together.

I'll share the bands here once I get a list of the ones I'm using. :-)